“Look what you made me do,
What have you done,boo?
The blame is on you!
Oh, you know this is true.
I’ve never tried this before,
Never, ever, never, ever,
I am one who always ignores,
You pushed me way too far.
You do not deserve love –
Love of any kind,
Everything about you sucks!
Who will want you, now?
Better believe it darling!
You are such a bad person,
Without me, you are nothing!
Hope you take this as a lesson!
Well, the bright side is this,
I love you, yea, you’re lucky!
Your lips I still want to kiss
‘Cause I find forgiveness easy.
No one can love you so dearly,
That is why your heart belongs to me,
No one, no one can, my honey,
That is why you are stuck with me.”
Said the abuser when he returned,
After she’d nursed her bruises,
After she’d counted all her scars,
After she’d almost made up her mind.
Her bags, she unpacked,
And made excuses on his behalf,
Forgetting he never really apologised,
At the junction of Almost, she turned right back.
Actually been there, it is a difficult chain to break.
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I’m so sorry you had to go through such 💔
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Thank you, but in all honesty, once you go through things such as that, you have that understanding, you have the honest empathy for others. When you tell them, I understand, you do, because you have faced it and survived.
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Thank you for such an intimate incite into the truth of Domestic Abuse. I also am Trustee Director of a UK charity that over 26 years has sheltered and rehabilitated over 3600 women and their children after horrific experiences. Many have drug and/alcohol issues so we also have a recovery program and are perhaps the only shelter in the UK where a Mother can keep her children during rehab, It is such a strong incentive for her to win through. Thanks for sharing this Omo and others with comments.
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Thank you very much for reading and all that you do for these women. It’s heroic. May the Lord continue to strengthen you. You might also like some other poems in my book.
Here’s the link to check it out:
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Abuse victims go through a range of stages of emotions. Your poem depicts one of them, My wife endured that in her first marriage, and wrote book of poems about the experience, “In My Shoes” by Lyn Crain. If you can find a copy, you might appreciate it.
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I’m so sorry your wife had to go through that. Where can I find a copy of her book?
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Thank you for reading. I appreciate it 💕
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oh dear. This happens too often.
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Sad reality
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Thank you for reading. I appreciate it ❤️❤️❤️
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That is so powerfully written!! I love it!
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Glad you love it! Thank you for reading. I appreciate it ❤️❤️❤️
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I really enjoyed it. Great imagery
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Well expressed in different formats constructed from the fundamentals..
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Thanks a million. I appreciate it ❤️❤️❤️
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How does one stay with such a sorry person! It is very sad to see.
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Very sad. Thank you for reading. I appreciate it ❤️
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You are strong with it,much feeling and depth and you got a film in you as a screen writer,you are on it,respect and peace
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind words. Stay safe. ❤️
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Reblogged this on Call It As It Is and commented:
this is so profound…your writing style is excellent and title Almost says it all…….congratulations i have posted this on my facebook page
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Many thanks. I appreciate it ❤️❤️❤️
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your work is profound ….not a word wasted or out of place…..the climax coming right at the end…..i have posted it on my facebook page
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Many thanks. Thank you for reading, leaving a positive comment and sharing. I appreciate it. Stay safe. ❤️
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We go back, and we go back, doesn’t matter that what we know deep down is wrong. Only because we hope against hope for better ❤️ sending love and and a lot of light toward healing.
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You’re right. Thank you for reading. I appreciate it. ❤️❤️❤️
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This is such a tragic scene, played out so horrifically often. I have prosecuted domestic violence for over 25 years. Each story of abuse tells a travesty. Each victim’s escape is a triumph of courage and strength.
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Thank you for reading. And thank you for fighting against this menace. ❤️❤️❤️
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Heartbreaking. Excellent ending line….and title. Well done.
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Many thanks for reading. I appreciate it. Have a nice day ahead. Stay safe ❤️
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There is something about love. I just don’t understand
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Tbh.
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Thank you for reading. I appreciate it. Stay safe. Have a nice day. ❤️❤️❤️
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The power! I’m new here and was wondering if you guys could check out my page I would really appreciate it! Have a nice day! caleecreates.wordpress.com
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Thank you for reading. I appreciate it. I’ll definitely check out your page. Welcome to WordPress ❤️❤️❤️
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Omo, the more we tell our own story, whether in prose or poetry or art or music or dance, the more it gives light to others to do the same themselves. I love your poem, Almost. Even the title holds the hopeful ambivalence that your writer holds in her decision-making.
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I am deeply moved by your kind comment. I’m glad you loved it. Thank you for reading. I appreciate it. ❤️❤️❤️
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I’m moved. It’s stories like this that drive my heart daily to want to bring healing to those who’ve never heard how deeply they are treasured and how fiercely they are loved by God, who never turns on them! Dear Omo, you are so loved and precious. I pray the love of God overflows on you and all who read this who have lived in such confusion and pain. It’s ok to leave. It’s hard to do, but ok to leave. It’s good to find our first love before we find another love… that, is Jesus. He washes away the trauma and rewrites our story! He rewrote mine! And now I’m so in love, with him. 🙂
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Beautiful. God’s love is the only kind of love that comes with no hurt. Thank you for your prayers. God bless you.
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Well crafted
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Thank you. I appreciate it. Have a great evening. Stay safe. ❤️❤️❤️
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Moved beyond sad. Wish so much more for life for anyone ready to leave abuser. Have seen it soo many times , been the one trying to get the friend to leave, but they return. Heartbreaking. Very deep 😥
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It’s a difficult chain to break.
Thank you for reading. I appreciate it.
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Gave me goosebumps! Luckily I have never been there.
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That’s fortunate. It’s a tough ride. Thank you for reading. Happy New Year to you ❤️❤️❤️
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Reblogged this on Nelsapy.
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Thank you very much for reblogging. I appreciate it ❤️
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Such a powerful poem!!!
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I’m glad you feel that way about this piece of poetry. Thank you for taking your time to read and leave a comment. It means so much to me ❤️
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My very sincere pleasure,.
Have a nice Sunday 🌺
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